Your documentations need some correcting, especially the book titles. Also, be sure that your reflections include specific examples and quotes from the sources.
Hello Cristhiam! I read your proposal and I like your ideas very much. Constructively, your paper and sources could use some grammatical fixes.
Here are some other sources I thought would be helpful: http://web.ebscohost.com.rpa.laguardia.edu:2048/ehost/pdfviewer/pdfviewer?sid=e1056853-a2b9-425a-8dd9-923b9f884cc9%40sessionmgr4&vid=2&hid=17
Please consult The Little Penguin Handbook in order to correct your MLA documentation of sources. Also, you need to revise your thesis and include it at the beginning of your annotated bibliography. Lastly, make sure that your reflections include specific example/quotes from the sources which will help you to draft your first draft.
Your documentations need some correcting, especially the book titles. Also, be sure that your reflections include specific examples and quotes from the sources.
ReplyDeleteHello Cristhiam! I read your proposal and I like your ideas very much. Constructively, your paper and sources could use some grammatical fixes.
ReplyDeleteHere are some other sources I thought would be helpful:
http://web.ebscohost.com.rpa.laguardia.edu:2048/ehost/pdfviewer/pdfviewer?sid=e1056853-a2b9-425a-8dd9-923b9f884cc9%40sessionmgr4&vid=2&hid=17
http://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=3DDEbFKCIOEC&oi=fnd&pg=PR9&dq=Michael+S.+Kimmel,+The+History+of+Men:+Essays+on+the+History+of+American+and+British+Masculinities&ots=quCqnYc69E&sig=MrssAUXbkEeIGHUesE90e9OoNPg#v=onepage&q&f=false
Please consult The Little Penguin Handbook in order to correct your MLA documentation of sources. Also, you need to revise your thesis and include it at the beginning of your annotated bibliography. Lastly, make sure that your reflections include specific example/quotes from the sources which will help you to draft your first draft.
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