-Thesis: ok -MLA style in-text citations: ok -Number of pages: You did 3, but it's less Than 900 words. -Outside sources: You got 2 out of 3 (so one is missing) -Works cited page: Missing -Unified Paragraphs: Your paragraphs seem to be unified but I think there are two same topic sentences in two different paragraphs.
-Thesis: ok
ReplyDelete-MLA style in-text citations: ok
-Number of pages: You did 3, but it's less Than 900 words.
-Outside sources: You got 2 out of 3 (so one is missing)
-Works cited page: Missing
-Unified Paragraphs: Your paragraphs seem to be unified but I think there are two same topic sentences in two different paragraphs.
buto vens i sent you the link of my comments
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